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"Let there arise out of you a band of people inviting to all that is good enjoining what is right and forbidding what is wrong; they are the ones to attain felicity".
(surah Al-Imran,ayat-104)
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User Name: saadat
Full Name: saadat tahir
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O man on the hill you sent us there
To a burnin hell for worse to fare

stingin sand and the blindin glare
in our face for early death to stare

lost an forgotten tribes with a snare
hummvies an gizmos didn't prepare

for lost friends an those who care
to sit on tonnage and deathly tare

bros and pals that covered my back
frozen for days, stored on a rack

I lost a limb an another an eye
Some were stung by a wicked fly

Natives saw us an tongued a spittle
their ire an angst, we knew but little

The barking sarg was such a creep
crackle an static wouldn't let me sleep

Someone's war was, for us to wage
to stand chins up and face the rage

endured for days the rancid stench
crooks and groups of ilk and hench

great the words for freeing a nation
truth trickled down in meager ration

Unfolding lies have tied my hands
My Youth's been lost to distant lands

Cryptic messages scribbled on packs
Lost in the mad rush to roll the sacks

An back'ome mowed my gal's look,
too long waited, another she'd took!

This messy ruin is of your make
Screwed up logic "for the counties sake"

Time's done a circle, around the stars
stripes are blurred the spin now jars

The dangling pride on a roof in Nam
The last post and the report is bam

Your dole an help can't lend me sate
Shuttling healthcare, to end my fate

Original"”saadat (Islamabad)
(April 13, 2009)


Some lingo has been advantageously used to mirror the rambling thoughts in the wracked mind of a disenchanted pfc"¦"¦

April brings to fore memories of the "operation frequent wind" evacuation of Saigon
Nam----
http://www.fas.org/irp/nsa/almanac-saigon.pdf
http://pro.corbis.com/images/U1835718-8.jp...CF83157030D3%7D
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Vj_ImnJrOA0...feature=related
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